Brand voice guidelines
Scenario #1:
GuerillaBox needs five error messages for their signup screen:
| Helper text included below email field | Trigger | Copy exploration | Recommendation | Rationale |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| None | User enters an invalid email address (missing @ symbol, domain, or username portion of the email address). | a) Oops, that email’s invalid. Check for typos and try again. |
b) Enter a valid email address in the format: [email protected]
c) That email doesn’t look right. Check for typos. | Enter a valid email address in the format: [email protected] | Option b seems most likely to prevent future errors since it provides a clear example of what the proper email structure should be. |
| Helper text included below email field | Trigger | Copy exploration | Recommendation | Rationale |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| None | User enters an email that is associated with an existing account. | a) This email is already associated with an account. Want to log in? |
b) Hey, we recognize this email! Want to log in?
c) Whoa, déjà vu! We’ve seen this email before. Want to log in?
d) An account with this email already exists. If it’s yours, log in. | This email is already associated with an account. Want to log in? | It’s possible the user already has an account and has forgotten, or accidentally clicked “Sign up” instead of “Log in”, so this gives them a shortcut to log in. |